Strengths and Weaknesses

I would have to say that the strength in my writing derives from my thought process throughout the story.  I told the story as if you were watching it all happen right in front of you.  Although in my case, this visual representation is about my literal thought process.  My other strength would have to be my conventions, or grammar and such.  I believe that my word choice was paramount in my storytelling.

All things considered, I would say my weakness in writing this story was stringing thoughts.  My mind is never on a set path between thoughts and this is seen in my writing.  I don't always try to follow the yellow brick road to the end of my story.  I often like to write as I think and let the story come together.  This may not be best for conveying a purpose or direction in a story however.  That is where I believe my second weakness lies.  I do not string one process together but rather collect my thoughts in groups and assemble them at random.